QUOTE(gscollector @ Mar 23 2018, 22:33)
it took the upload trying again[attachmentid=115665]
First, you may want to do some leveling to get rid of the dust.
Text is oversized and doesn't seem to be black (#000000).
You should use a different font for the background text on panel 2.
The redraw on panel 2 isn't all that bad, but you did damage the border of the panel a little.
And why did you use the resized 1280x1842 image instead of the original 2101x3023?