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Mar 16 2014, 10:04
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Red of EHCOVE
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This is a thread for when I am too lazy to start a dedicated thread for a bounty, usually for those occasions when I find a translator before I post a bounty. Rules reminder: Translate the linked gallery into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed. This translation includes credit pages. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted. This release will be under an [EHCOVE] group tag. You (the translator) will be credited for your work on a credit page unless you want to be anonymous. If you accept the bounty, accept it here, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2-3 weeks and you are unresponsive, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it. In addition to the carriers listed, you can also just post the translation in the forums. Also: * Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty; * broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted; * yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present; * yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak); * if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it; * if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me); * crappy editing will not be accepted; * translated SFXes should be edited in unless they require substantial redrawing, about which we can negotiate; * please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, as well as the name of any other major sponsors for the translation and editing (check bounties). Also, note this is an [EHCOVE] release, add a link to the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host, and invite readers to use our bounty system or join us as editors/translators. * Since I get often asked for examples of what EHCOVE style credit pages are, here are some credit pages I liked a lot: link; link; link; link; link; link; link; link; link; link; * those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here); * if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here  ); Helpful links for the translators: Guide for New & Potential Translators, Japanese slang, a guide on Japanese onomatopoeia (Tonigobe), [ www.writtensound.com] www.writtensound.com, Bad translations. Examples of.Helpful links for the editors: Comprehensive editing guide, Your Tips for Manga Editing!Also: Bounty EtiquetteThis post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Nov 24 2014, 08:30
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 Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+Created tags you can blame me for: clamp ( def, use), clone ( def, use), closed eyes ( def, use), dismantling ( def, use), facial hair ( def, use), fishnets ( def, use), hair buns ( def, use), headless ( def, use), hood ( def, use), horns ( def, use), kemonomimi ( def, use), missing cover ( def, use), sarashi ( def, use), sketch lines ( def, use), soushuuhen ( def, use), tail ( def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming ( def, use), large tattoo ( def, use), exhibitionismInteresting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watchingTags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion ( please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleriesMy scan commissionsCan you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream |
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Sep 25 2014, 03:12
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Ser Maggot
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Accepted the bounty for [50PointCaliper (Usami Suruga)] Suguha -Kouhen- (SOA).
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Sep 26 2014, 06:18
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Nomake Wan
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QUOTE(Flame13 @ Sep 25 2014, 09:04)  here you can check some pages for qc: [ www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/fnr9qdI'm on a netbook 400 miles away from my main computer, but from what I can see this looks awesome. Are the JPGs working out for you source-wise? If you want, they're pretty huge and of course are unedited but I can send the original TIFFs your way. Awesome stuff! |
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Sep 28 2014, 09:25
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Red of EHCOVE
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A nice short SOA script for (SC57) [Adulterator (Kano)] Oniichan dakedo Itoko dakara ♥ Kozukuri shitemo ♥ Mondai naiyone (Sword Art Online) http://ehentaihip.com/g/544155/2324ad7072/QUOTE [ www.mediafire.com] http://www.mediafire.com/view/imzc9n18hv5h9b0/(SC57)_[Adulterator_(Kano)]_Oniichan_dakedo_Itoko_dakara_♥_Kozukuri_shitemo_♥_Mondai_naiyone_(Sword_Art_Online).txt http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11117P4 おにいちゃんの 股問付近が さっきからこう。。。 Oniichan's crotch has been like this for a while... こ、これはやはり男の人生理現象！！ Th, this must be man's physiological phenomena!! もうすぐお母さんが来るのに、このままでいいのかな。。。。。。？ Mother is going to return soon, is it alright to leave oniichan like this? いいわけ無いよね 私だって今 凄く気まずいもん no, it isn't. it will be awkward if mother see this. 何とかしてあげないと i have to do something お兄ちゃん。。。。。。お、起きないよね oniichan... won't wake up soon, right? えっと。。。。。。どうしたらいいのかな？ 確か、射精すると普通に戻るんだよね umm... what should i do? if i'm not mistaken, it will be normal again after ejaculating... 。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。 考えても仕方ない実践あるのみっ とりあえず、えいっ！ thinking about it won't help, i just have to do it. First i have to, ei! P5 前にクラスの男子があたしにこういう風にされたいって話してるの 聞いちゃって。。。。。。 i have been hearing that boys in my class were talking, that they want me to do something like this... その時は凄く不愉快だってけど、いいよ お兄ちゃんなら。。。。。。 it makes me feel uncomfortable, but if it's oniichan... 乳首擦れて。。。。。。。 my nipples are rubbing... はアッ haa はあっ haa 何か変な気分になって来ちゃって。。。 weird feeling is coming... はー haa はあっ haa わっ uwa これがせ。。。。。。。。。。。。/// this is se... お兄ちゃんまだ元気。。。 一回じゃ駄目なのか。。。 oniichan's still... is it not enough... P6 し、仕方ないよね緊急事態だしっ I, it can't be helped, i have to do it fast.. お兄ちゃんはじめて。。。かな？ oniichan... is it your first time... はー haa はあっ haa あたしが相手じゃ嫌かな？ is it allright if it's me? ほら、さきっぽが入。。。。。。っ 起きない。。。と お兄ちゃんの 初。。。めて、あたしが 奪っちゃう よ？ look, the tip is entering... if you don't wake up... i will ta.. ke your first time. もうすぐぜんぶ入っちゃうよっ all of it will be inside me soon... はアッ haa あッ ahh ぜん。。。。。。ぶ。。。。。。 はいった。。。。。。。。。！！ it's... inside me... entirely...!! お兄ちゃん。。。。。。 oniichan... 。。。。。。。。。。。。すき ...i love you. 。。。。。。きこえないのが 分かってる時しか 言えないの i can only say it, when i'm sure you can't hear it. はー haa はあっ haa 弱虫だね、あたし i'm such a coward. P7 お兄ちゃんとえっちしてるっ i'm doing lewd things with oniichan.. はアッ haa はー haa はあっ haa お兄ちゃんっ oniichan.. あー ahh お兄ちゃん oniichan あ ah はア haa あ。。。あ。。。あアっ ah...ah...aah.. あッ ah.. はあ haa はアッ haa お兄ちゃんのが中に。。。。。。っ oniichan's inside me... はー haa あっ抜けちゃ。。。。。。っ ah, it came out... だめえっ no... はあっ ha.. んしょ。。。。。。っと here......mn P8 はアッ haa あッ ahh あっ ahh はア haa はあっ haa 早く起きないとお兄ちゃんの初めて全部奪っちゃうからあっ hurry wake up, or i will steal all of oniichan's first time.. はあっ haa はー haa はー haa はあっ haa あー aah はー haa あ。。。。。やっと、普通に戻ったあ。。。。。。 ah......at last, it's normal again... はあっ haa.. もう、こんなに射精したら赤ちゃん出来ちゃうよ。。。。。。 oniichan, if you came like this, i could get pregnant... なんだか和人が it's only a day たった一日で妙にやつれたような。。。。。。 but somehow he looks really worn out そ、そうかなっ re, really? おしまい finnish editing bounty posted at http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11141This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Sep 29 2014, 11:03
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Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+Created tags you can blame me for: clamp ( def, use), clone ( def, use), closed eyes ( def, use), dismantling ( def, use), facial hair ( def, use), fishnets ( def, use), hair buns ( def, use), headless ( def, use), hood ( def, use), horns ( def, use), kemonomimi ( def, use), missing cover ( def, use), sarashi ( def, use), sketch lines ( def, use), soushuuhen ( def, use), tail ( def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming ( def, use), large tattoo ( def, use), exhibitionismInteresting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watchingTags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion ( please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleriesMy scan commissionsCan you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream |
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Sep 30 2014, 03:36
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Ser Maggot
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Doing (SC57) [Adulterator (Kano)] Oniichan dakedo Itoko dakara ♥ Kozukuri shitemo ♥ Mondai naiyone (Sword Art Online). It's really short, should be done soon.
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Sep 30 2014, 05:21
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Nomake Wan
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QUOTE(Flame13 @ Sep 25 2014, 09:04) here you can check some pages for qc: [ www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/fnr9qdBack on my proper desktop with 24" monitor. Are these quick edits as proofs of concept or final works? The speech bubble cleaning is pretty...jarring. It's like, the part that covers up the original text, yeah, it's there...but if you're gonna bother with that, why not just normalize the entire bubble so it's not nearly as obvious? Of course that critique means nothing if these are just PoC. |
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Sep 30 2014, 10:07
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Flame13
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just PoC. i wanted to show, how i work on the bg, the lines etc. as you and Red_Piotrus asked for. as you can see here, the bubbleproblem is no more: [ www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/8h4ljvplease tell me, if you see more errors. if you say its ok, then i'm done. |
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Sep 30 2014, 23:27
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Nomake Wan
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QUOTE(Flame13 @ Sep 30 2014, 07:07) just PoC. i wanted to show, how i work on the bg, the lines etc. as you and Red_Piotrus asked for. as you can see here, the bubbleproblem is no more: [ www.sendspace.com] https://www.sendspace.com/file/8h4ljvplease tell me, if you see more errors. if you say its ok, then i'm done. Yeah then I apologize, this looks fabulous. Thank you sir, you are a far greater editor than I. Thank you for bringing this translation to the masses! Now, take our e-dosh! You deserve it! P.S. Hahaha, I noticed you kept my TL commentary. I want to leave it up to Red_Piotrus on whether or not that actually ends up in the final gallery. I put those comments into the TL so that you, the editor, were not confused by the empty bubbles thinking that maybe something got skipped or my scanner messed up.  But while I put 'em in for editing's sake, I'll let Red decide if they're something the reader should see. |
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Oct 2 2014, 02:35
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Red of EHCOVE
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I am always fond of TL comments Will post to galleries as soon as we get the EHCOVE style credits. Nice job, people!
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Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+Created tags you can blame me for: clamp ( def, use), clone ( def, use), closed eyes ( def, use), dismantling ( def, use), facial hair ( def, use), fishnets ( def, use), hair buns ( def, use), headless ( def, use), hood ( def, use), horns ( def, use), kemonomimi ( def, use), missing cover ( def, use), sarashi ( def, use), sketch lines ( def, use), soushuuhen ( def, use), tail ( def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming ( def, use), large tattoo ( def, use), exhibitionismInteresting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watchingTags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion ( please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleriesMy scan commissionsCan you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream |
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Oct 2 2014, 05:38
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Flame13
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ok, here is the missing credits page
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Oct 2 2014, 05:38
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Flame13
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ok, here is the missing credits page
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Oct 2 2014, 05:40
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Flame13
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ok, here is the missing credits page  |
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Oct 2 2014, 05:41
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Flame13
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ok, here is the missing credits page |
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Oct 2 2014, 05:45
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Flame13
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grrrr.....
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where is the f****g delet-button...
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Oct 25 2014, 02:17
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NekoHime27
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I've PMed you the script .
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Oct 26 2014, 09:56
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Red of EHCOVE
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Great. The thread for my Chinese to English TLs is here but it's a good idea to mention this here; I'll post the editing bounties here shortly for reference, too. EDIT editing bounties for those two scrips are here http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11115http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11314This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Oct 27 2014, 20:33
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Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+Created tags you can blame me for: clamp ( def, use), clone ( def, use), closed eyes ( def, use), dismantling ( def, use), facial hair ( def, use), fishnets ( def, use), hair buns ( def, use), headless ( def, use), hood ( def, use), horns ( def, use), kemonomimi ( def, use), missing cover ( def, use), sarashi ( def, use), sketch lines ( def, use), soushuuhen ( def, use), tail ( def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming ( def, use), large tattoo ( def, use), exhibitionismInteresting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watchingTags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion ( please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleriesMy scan commissionsCan you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream |
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Dec 27 2014, 14:18
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mathillean
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Bounty accepted for: EHCOVE [Kaicho-Maniax (Nanami Yasuna)] Absolute Zero (TIGER & BUNNY) -> english Work commencing 
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Dec 29 2014, 17:21
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litinium
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QUOTE http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11118http://ehentaihip.com/g/518011/64f3c440da/[Takane no Hanazono (Takane Nohana)] Silica no Asoko wo Okashimakuri! (Sword Art Online) [Digital] ５ パーティーとケンカ別れして[迷いの森]を単独突破しようとしたあたしは After I got into quarrel with my party and separated, i tried to force my way through the Forest of Wandering alone. ピナ Pina! ドランクエイプ三匹に苦戦し大切なパートナー[ピナ]が撲殺され Having a hard time fighting three Drunk Ape at once, my dearest partner, Pina, beaten to death. ・・・すまなかった 君の友達助けられなかった・・・ ...sorry, I couldn't save your friend... だけど 心アイテムが残っていれば蘇生の可能性がある but, if there is any remaining item from it, there is still a chance to save it. そんなピンチを救ってくれたのが The man who save me was ドランクエイプ二匹を一撃で薙ぎ払ったキリトさんでした able to mow down four Drunk Ape in one strike. Kirito-san. ピナを失い途方に暮ているあたしに As I was strucken by the loss ほっほんとですか！？ R-Really!? 使い魔蘇生用アイテムを取りに行く手助けを申し出てくれました he offered to me his assistance to get the Familiar Revival item あたしシリカっていいます I'm Silica よろしくな Nice to meet you ６ あたしとキリトさんはひとまず三十五層の主街区で一晩休み After that Kirito-san and me spend a night at floor 35 to rest 翌日目的地へ向かう事に・・・ as next day we headed to our destination... おやすみ Good night おやすみなさい Good night ・・・ベッドってこんなに広かったんだ ...the bed felt so spacious. ピナと友達になってから毎晩ふわふわの体を抱いて寝てたから Since Pina became my partner, we always slept together. 閉鎖世界SAOに囚われ不安に押し潰されそうになっていたあたしを I always feel overwhelmed by anxiety being trapped in this sealed world. ピナが慰めてくれていた Pina was the only one to console me. ・・・ピナ ...Pina ７ 唯一のパートナーであり友達だったピナを Pina was my only friend and partner 自分のせいで死なせてしまった・・・ Because of my own fault Pina died... ピナ・・・ Pina... ピナ・・・ Pina... 悲しい時 寂しい時 When I feel sad or lonely, 何度ピナに慰めてもらった事だろう Pina always there to console me. ピナの事を想い出すと勝手に手が動いちゃう・・・ Remembering Pina made my hand move on its own. んっ Mn！ あっ Ah! んっ Mn! うん Uhn! ピナがいないのにこんなに濡れちゃってる I got this wet even though Pina is not here. あっ・・・ Ah...! でも・・・・・・指だけじゃヤだ but... with only my fingers. もっとピナを感じたいよ I want to feel Pina more. ピナ・・・ Pina... ８ あっ・・・ Ah... ぴっピナ・・・ P-pina... あっ Ah! あっ Ah! ピナのふわふわが気持ちいい・・・・・・ Pina's feather feels so good... じっ焦らさないで早くオマンコ触って・・・ Don't tease me, hurry my pussy... あ あぁっ Ah Aaah! シリカのオマンコにぃ・・・ Silica's pussy... ちょちょっと撫でられただけで I...I brushed it gently 軽くイっちゃったぁ・・・ and came a bit... ９ あっ あっ Ah! Ah!<3 ・・・舐めてぇ ...Lick me あっ Ah! あっ Ah! ピナの舌でシリカのオマンコ舐めて欲しいよぉ・・・・・・はあうう！ Silica want Pina's tongue...... Hauuu! もっと舐めてぇぇ・・・・・・っ Lick me more......! あっ Ah! んっ Mn! んっ Mn! もっとぉ・・・ピナぁ・・・ More... Pina... はぁー Haa はぁー Haa もっもう・・・我慢できないよ・・・ I can't... hold it anymore... くちゅっ おちん・・・ちん・・・・・・ピナのオチンチンが欲しいのぉ・・・ P-penis...I want Pina's inside me...<3 んっ！！ Mn!! は、挿入ってるぅ・・・ I-it's coming in... ピナのオチンチン挿入ってきちゃうよぉ・・・ Pina's dick is penetrating me...<3 １０ ぴっピナのオチンチンが擦れてぇ・・・・・・ Pi-pina's dick is rubbing me...... 気持ちいい・・・シリカの膣内の奥まで届いちゃってるよ Feels good... it's deep inside Silica's pussy <3 あっ Ah! あっ Ah! も・・・もっとぉ もっと激しく突いてぇ・・・ M-more... thrust me harder...<3 シリカのオマンコが壊れちゃうくらい・・・ until you break Silica's pussy... あっ Ah! はっ Uh! あっ Ah! ピナのオチンチンでぇシリカを滅茶苦茶にちてぇ～～ Pina's dick ish wreaking me~~<3 しゅっしゅごいぃ・・・ A-amaasshing... はっ Uh! あっ Ah! オマンコ突かれながらぁクリトリス舐められちゃってぇ Thrusting me and licking my clitoris まっまた・・・イっちゃうぅぅ～～っ I... come again~~! <3 ひっ Hi! １１ だっ射精してぇ・・・<3 Let it out... あっ あぁーっ Ah! Aaah! ピナの専用マンコにザーメン中出ししてぇ・・・ ピナの赤ちゃん孕ませてぇぇ～～ Let it out inside my Pina's only pussy... impregnate me~~!<3 ・・・こんなんじゃ満足できないよ It can't satisfy me ピナの本当のオチンチンが・・・ Pina's dick... 早く・・・ほしいい・・・ よ・・・・・・ Hurry... I want it... １２ シリカ 起きてるかい？ Silica, are you awake? そろそろ行かないか Are you ready to go? うそっ寝過ごしちゃった！？ uwah! I overslept!? いっ今 行きますっ！ I-I'm getting ready now! おっおはようございます G-Good morning. おはよう 準備は いいかい？ Are you ready? はいっ Yes. じゃ 行こう Let's go. １３ 四十七層 Floor 47 昨日みたいなパニックは起こさない I feel alot better than yesterday. 自分に出せる全力で戦うんだ I will fight with my best. 待っててね ピナ Wait for me Pina. もうすぐ生き返らせてあげるからね・・・・・・ I will revive you...... ぎゃあぁぁ～っ！？ ぎゃっ Gyaaa!? Gya! きっ気持ちワルーっ！！ なに これーっ！？ It's gross!! What is this!? だっ大丈夫だってそいつはすごく弱いから簡単に・・・ C-calm down, it's weak... だ・・・だって 気持ち悪いんですぅ～っ B-but, it's gross~ そいつで気持ちわるがってたらこの先に進んだら大変だぞー If you feel gross now with that, the next area would be worse. １４ こっこの・・・ T-this thing... いい加減に・・・ Stop it already... ひゃぁんっ！？ Hyaah!? えっ？まっまさか・・・ Eh? I-It can't be... ぱっパンツ 履き忘れてるーーっ！！ I-I forgot to wear my pants!!! あんっ Ahn! やだ・・・ 昨日満足できなかったから No... I couldn't get myself satisfied last night... まだ少し濡れちゃってるぅ・・・ I still a bit wet down there... やっやめてぇ・・・っ S-stop it...! やぁっ No! ツタを切って下りないと・・・ I have to cut these vines... でも・・・ 左手を離したら キリトさんに丸見えになっちゃう・・・ But.. if i let go of my skirt, Kirito-san would be able to see me down there ちょっ！？ W-wai!? １５ きゃあっ！？ Kya!? きっキリトさん見ないでぇ～っ！ Ki-Kirito-san don't look~! 見ないで助けてぇ～っ！！ Don't look! Help me~! そ・・・それはちょっと無理だよ T...that's impossible. っ！？ ...!? ひぃっ！！ Hii!! なっ何これベトベトして・・・っ！？ W-what is this sticky thing...!? 落ち着いて Calm down. そいつの縛りは大した事ない 花の下の白い所を狙えば簡単に倒せる That things' bind is weak, if you aim the white part below the flower you can defeat it easily. そっそんなこと言われても・・・・・・っ E-even if you say that... １６ やっ Yah! あっ Ah! おっぱいとぉ・・・おまんこぉ 吸われちゃってるぅぅ・・・・・・っ My chest... and my pussy... being sucked...! かっ感じ過ぎちゃうからぁ吸っちゃぁぁ・・・・・・らめぇぇぇ～～～～っ！！ちっ乳首にぃ 雌しべが絡み付 いてぇ・・・ んうぅ・・・っ！ I-it feels too goooood!... don't suck iiiit~~~~!! the buds are coiling my nipples... Uuu...!! ひゃっ！？ Hya!? そ・・・そんなに強くぅ引っ張らないでぇ・・・・・・ D..Don't pull it hard...... もっもう ぁ・・・あたし・・・ I-I can't... hold anymore... おかしくなっちゃうよぉ・・・ It make me crazy... あひっ！？ Ahii!? そ・・・そこは・・・ やめ・・・っ T-that place is... no, stop...! あぁっ！くっクリトリスぅシゴかれてりゅぅぅ・・・っ Aaah! I-it's stroking my clitoris...! あっ Ah! あっ Ah! ほ・・・ほんとにっおかしくなっちゃうぅぅ・・・ It really make me crazy... １７ き、キリトさんの前で恥ずかしいのにぃ・・・ I-in front of Kirito-san, this shameful... き、気持ちひぃ・・・ F-feels good...<3 こんな・・・っ気持ちひぃぃの初めてぇぇ・・・ it's my first time... to feel this good... ふぅ んぅーっ Uu Nguu! あくぅっ！？ Kuuh!? おっお尻にぃツタがぁ・・・・・・ Th-the vine is on my anus... ふぐぅっ！ Guuh! ツタちんぽ ぉ・・・おいひぃ・・・ Vine's dick... derihyuus...<3 先っぽから甘い汁が溢れてるぅ・・・ Sweet liquid is overflowing from the tip... もっもう・・・イっちゃう・・・ I-I'll... comee... なっ何で？ もうちょっとで・・・ っ！？ W-what happen? Just a little more I woul...!? いっいや・・・そんなピナより太いの挿入れられたら・・・ N-no.. if something thicker than Pina's penetrate me... んっ んぅー Mn! Mnnn １８ は・・・入ってるぅ～っ！ I-it's penetrating me~! んっ んぅー！！ Mn! Nghh!! モンスターの太い舌がピナ専用オマンコにぃ 入っちゃってるよぉぉ～～っ！！ A monster's thick tongue is entering Pina's exclusive pussy~~!! き・・・気持ちぃ・・・いぃぃ・・・ I-it... f-feels... good...<3 んっ Mn! んふっ Ngh! 舌のブツブツがオマンコの中引っ掻かれながらぁ・・・・・・っ The tongue's bumps are scratching my inside......! お尻のツタと挟まれてるぅ・・・ It's touching the one inside my ass...<3 か・・・身体中ぅ 掻き回されてぇぇ・・・・・・ M-my whole body... stirred up... １９ いっイクぅ・・・ C-coming... イク・・・っ Come...! イクっ！ come! イクっ！ Coming! んふっ Ngh! ピナ以外のモンスターでイっちゃ・・・・・・ A monster other than Pina gonna make me cum...... 花の下の白い所を狙えっ！ Hit the white part below the flower now! ２０ 短剣スキル ファッドエッジ Dagger Skill Fad Edge ・・・見ました？ ...You watched? ・・・見てない ...No, I didn't. じゃ、この膨らみは何ですか？ Then, what is this? そっそれは！？ T-that is!? あたしの見てこんなになっちゃったんですか？ You got this hard from watching me? すごいドキドキする・・・ Amazing, it is throbbing... イク寸前だったから・・・？ Is it about to come...? ・・・オチンチン ...dick オチンチン欲しいよぉ・・・ I want dick... しっシリカ！？ S-Silica!? ２１ しょっぱくてちょっと苦い It's salty and a bit bitter. これが男性のオチンチンの味・・・ This is a man's penis taste... でも・・・ 嫌いじゃないかも but... i don't hate it. キリトさん・・・ん どうでふか？ Kirito-san...mmn how is it? もっもう・・・イキそうだよ・・・ I-I... gonna come... ぷはっ Fuah! し・・・シリカ・・・？ Si... Silica...? イケずにおあずけされる気持ち・・・分かりますか？ You are on the verge...right? 早く助けてくれなかったからこんなになっちゃたんですよ・・・ Because you didn't help me earlier, I become like this... 責任取ってくださいキリトさん・・・ Please take responsibility, Kirito-san...<3 ２２ あっ ひうっ Ah! Hii! は・・・初めて・・・人の オチン・・・チン・・・ M-my first time... with a man's penis...<3 ピナより・・・気持ちいぃぃ・・・ It feels... better than Pina's...<3 シリカは使い魔とHしてたのか Silica, you do ecchi things with your familiar? あっ Ah! ・・・はい してましたぁ・・・ ...Yes, I do... 使い魔をオナニーの道具にするなんて・・・ Using familiar to satisfy yourself... とんだ変態ビーストテイマーだな What a pervert Beast Master you are... あひぃっ Hiii! そ・・・そんな・・・ 変態だなんてぇ・・・ N-no... I'm not a pervert... ２３ そんな変態さんにはおしおきに中出しだっ！ To punish a pervert like you, I will come inside! シリカの膣内にぃいっぱぃぃ・・・なっ中出しぃ・・・ C-come inside Silica's...<3 a lot...<3 いっぱい・・・おしおきしてくださいぃぃ～～っ！！ P-please... punish me more~~!! ２４ その後色々あったものの・・・ After that lots of thing happens... 蘇生アイテム[プネウマの花]を手に入れ I got the revival item (Flower of Pneuma). ピナを生き返らせる事ができました I could finally revive Pina. キリトさんはすぐ最前線に戻ってしまいました Kirito-san immidiately returned to the front line. 本当は連れて行って欲しかった・・・ Actually I wanted to come along... でも・・・あたしが行っても手足まといにしかならないから But... with my skill I will only be a burden キリトさんと別れて数日たまに寂しい時もあるけれど・・・ It has been sometimes after I parted with Kirito-san, but when I feel lonely... そんな時はピナと with Pina... キリトさんから貰った短剣があるので大丈夫です and the dagger that I recieved from Kirito-san, I will be alright <3 ぴっピナのオチンチンとぉ・・・ キリトさんのぉオチンチンがぁぁ・・・ Pina's penis... Kirito-san's penis... んっ Mn! はぁーっ Haaa! お腹の中でぇ擦れあってぇぇ・・・気持ちひぃのぉぉぉ～～っ Rubbing inside my belly... It feels so good~~!<3 25 はじめましてorこんにちわ。 Hi, nice to meet you. 印刷所の「触手割」が利用できず、ガッカリな たかねのはなです I'm Takane no hana, who disappointed because of not getting the "Tentacle Rebate" from printing shop. シリカ本、いかがでしたでしょうか？ Do you like this, Silica book? タイトルに相当悩んだり、当初マンガ２２P予定が２０Pに減り I was quite troubled choosing the title. At first it was planned as 22 page, but then it reduced to 20 page. 多少の余裕ができたので触手責めを But then I got time to spare, so I made these tentacles 増やしつつ２２Pに戻し I increase it slowly to 22 page again 増ページ分の前後の辻棲合わせに 時間が掛かってしまったため キリトとのカラミを２P減らして・・・・・・ The interlude was taking too much time, so I reduced 2 page of Kirito's intercourse...... とか、やっていたらキリトが挿入から果てるまで たった２Pの超早漏にｗ さすがSAO内一番の反応速度！ｗｗ Then I realized, Kirito's intercourse was only 2 page and he came lol. As expected from the fastest reaction speed player in SAO! rofl さて、次は冬コミになってしまいそうです。 Well, next is Winter Comicket. 本当は夏コミ後に凌辱アスナ本とか出したかったんですがしばらく仕事三昧な感じかな～と。 Actually I had a plan to make an Asuna rape book after Summer Comicket, but I think I'll concentrate for a while on my work. 夏コミ前にコアマガジンからは 初となる単行本が発売されています。 Before the summer comicket, I got my first sale on my tankoubon. 同人と合わせ、商業の方も よろしくお願いします Best regards for other artists and those in the business. |
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Dec 30 2014, 08:25
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Red of EHCOVE
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I think this one is ready for editing, through some minor proofing comments may appear shortly editing bounty http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11638
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Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+Created tags you can blame me for: clamp ( def, use), clone ( def, use), closed eyes ( def, use), dismantling ( def, use), facial hair ( def, use), fishnets ( def, use), hair buns ( def, use), headless ( def, use), hood ( def, use), horns ( def, use), kemonomimi ( def, use), missing cover ( def, use), sarashi ( def, use), sketch lines ( def, use), soushuuhen ( def, use), tail ( def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming ( def, use), large tattoo ( def, use), exhibitionismInteresting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watchingTags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion ( please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleriesMy scan commissionsCan you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream |
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Dec 30 2014, 19:09
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BakaStratos
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Proofreading. A question to future users of the script - later, both "coming/come" and "cum/cumming" is used. Might I suggest picking one side...I'll leave it to editor's/TN's discretion.
Also, I thought Silica refered to Kirito as -kun? Any hardcore SAo buffs know?
Red for changed stuff
<QC:...comments will be on this>
If something needs to be nuked by N.Korea and USA replaced, I'll strikethrough and add the replacement with red
[Takane no Hanazono (Takane Nohana)] Silica no Asoko wo Okashimakuri! (Sword Art Online) [Digital]
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After I got into quarrel with my party and separated, I tried to force my way through the Forest of Wandering alone.
Pina!
Having a hard time fighting three Drunk Apes at once, my dearest partner, Pina, was beaten to death.
...sorry, I couldn't save your friend...
but, if there is any remaining item from it, there is still a chance to save it.
The man who saved me was
able to mow down four Drunk Apes in one strike. Kirito-san. <QC: Double checking. How many Drunk Ape were there? 3 or 4?>
As I was stricken by the my loss <QC: Seemed personal, so thought this might fit better>
R-Really!?
he offered to me his assistance to get the Familiar Revival item
あたしシリカっていいます
I'm Silica
よろしくな
Nice to meet you
６
After that, Kirito-san and me spent a night at Floor 35 to rest
as we were going to head to our destination tomorrow...<QC: I'm not sure how to make the phrases separated by the ellipsis smoother. See note 1 below.>
Good night
Good night
...the bed felt so spacious. <QC: Isn't spacious a good thing? Can I suggest "empty"? Not quite sure if it fits>
Since Pina became my partner, we always slept together.
I always felt overwhelmed by anxiety being trapped in this sealed world. <QC:I see SAO...but I agree "sealed world" sounds better.>
Pina was the only one to console me.
...Pina
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Pina was my only friend and partner
Because of my own fault me, Pina died...
Pina...
Pina...
Whenever I feel sad or lonely,
Pina was always there to console me. <QC:Added -ever and was>
Remembering Pina made my hand move on its own.
んっ
Mn！
あっ
Ah!
んっ
Mn!
うん
Uhn!
ピナがいないのにこんなに濡れちゃってる
I got this wet even though Pina is not here.
あっ・・・
Ah...!
でも・・・・・・指だけじゃヤだ
but... with only my fingers. my fingers aren't enough. <QC:This gets the point across better. Someone give her those plant tentacles...>
もっとピナを感じたいよ
I want to feel Pina more.
ピナ・・・
Pina...
８
あっ・・・
Ah...
ぴっピナ・・・
P-pina...
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ピナのふわふわが気持ちいい・・・・・・
Pina's feather feels so good...
じっ焦らさないで早くオマンコ触って・・・
Don't tease me, hurry my pussy... <QC: "hurry my pussy" feels wrong, but not sure how to improve it. "my pussy, hurry..."?>
あ あぁっ
Ah Aaah!
シリカのオマンコにぃ・・・
Silica's pussy...
ちょちょっと撫でられただけで
I...I brushed it gently
軽くイっちゃったぁ・・・
and came a bit...
９
あっ あっ
Ah! Ah!<3
・・・舐めてぇ
...Lick me
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ピナの舌でシリカのオマンコ舐めて欲しいよぉ・・・・・・はあうう！
Silica want Pina's tongue...... Hauuu!
もっと舐めてぇぇ・・・・・・っ
Lick me more......!
あっ
Ah!
んっ
Mn!
んっ
Mn!
もっとぉ・・・ピナぁ・・・
More... Pina...
はぁー
Haa
はぁー
Haa
もっもう・・・我慢できないよ・・・
I can't... hold it anymore...
くちゅっ
おちん・・・ちん・・・・・・ピナのオチンチンが欲しいのぉ・・・
P-penis...I want Pina's inside me...<3
んっ！！
Mn!!
は、挿入ってるぅ・・・
I-it's coming in...
ピナのオチンチン挿入ってきちゃうよぉ・・・
Pina's dick is penetrating me...<3
１０
ぴっピナのオチンチンが擦れてぇ・・・・・・
Pi-Pina's dick is rubbing me......
気持ちいい・・・シリカの膣内の奥まで届いちゃってるよ
Feels good... it's deep inside Silica's pussy <3
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
も・・・もっとぉ もっと激しく突いてぇ・・・
M-more... thrust me harder...<3
シリカのオマンコが壊れちゃうくらい・・・
until you break Silica's pussy...
あっ
Ah!
はっ
Uh!
あっ
Ah!
ピナのオチンチンでぇシリカを滅茶苦茶にちてぇ～～
Pina's dick ish wreaking me~~<3
しゅっしゅごいぃ・・・
A-amaasshing...
はっ
Uh!
あっ
Ah!
オマンコ突かれながらぁクリトリス舐められちゃってぇ
Thrusting me and licking my clitoris
まっまた・・・イっちゃうぅぅ～～っ
I'm... coming again~~! <3
ひっ
Hi!
１１
だっ射精してぇ・・・<3
Let it out...
あっ あぁーっ
Ah! Aaah!
ピナの専用マンコにザーメン中出ししてぇ・・・ ピナの赤ちゃん孕ませてぇぇ～～
Let it out inside my Pina's only pussy... impregnate me~~!<3
・・・こんなんじゃ満足できないよ
...It This can't satisfy me
ピナの本当のオチンチンが・・・
Pina's dick...
早く・・・ほしいい・・・ よ・・・・・・
Hurry... I want it...
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シリカ 起きてるかい？
Silica, are you awake?
そろそろ行かないか
Are you ready to go?
うそっ寝過ごしちゃった！？
Uwah! I overslept!?
いっ今 行きますっ！
I-I'm getting ready now!
おっおはようございます
G-Good morning.
おはよう 準備は いいかい？
Are you ready?
はいっ
Yes! <QC:More enthusiasm?>
じゃ 行こう
Let's go.
１３
四十七層
Floor 47
昨日みたいなパニックは起こさない
I feel alot better than yesterday.
自分に出せる全力で戦うんだ
I will fight with my best.
待っててね ピナ
Wait for me Pina.
もうすぐ生き返らせてあげるからね・・・・・・
I will revive you......
ぎゃあぁぁ～っ！？ ぎゃっ
Gyaaa!? Gya!
きっ気持ちワルーっ！！ なに これーっ！？
It's gross!! What is this!?
だっ大丈夫だってそいつはすごく弱いから簡単に・・・
C-calm down, it's weak...
だ・・・だって 気持ち悪いんですぅ～っ
B-but, it's gross~
そいつで気持ちわるがってたらこの先に進んだら大変だぞー
If you feel gross now with that, the next area would be worse.
１４
こっこの・・・
T-this thing...
いい加減に・・・
Stop it already...
ひゃぁんっ！？
Hyaah!?
えっ？まっまさか・・・
Eh? I-It can't be...
ぱっパンツ 履き忘れてるーーっ！！
I-I forgot to wear my pants!!!
あんっ
Ahn!
やだ・・・ 昨日満足できなかったから
No... I couldn't get myself satisfied satisfy myself last night...
まだ少し濡れちゃってるぅ・・・
I'm still a bit wet down there...
やっやめてぇ・・・っ
S-stop it...!
やぁっ
No!
ツタを切って下りないと・・・
I have to cut these vines...
でも・・・ 左手を離したら キリトさんに丸見えになっちゃう・・・
But.. if i let go of my skirt, Kirito-san would be able to see me down there
ちょっ！？
W-wai!?
１５
きゃあっ！？
Kya!?
きっキリトさん見ないでぇ～っ！
Ki-Kirito-san don't look~!
見ないで助けてぇ～っ！！
Don't look! Help me~!
そ・・・それはちょっと無理だよ
T...that's impossible.
っ！？
...!?
ひぃっ！！
Hii!!
なっ何これベトベトして・・・っ！？
W-what is this sticky thing...!?
落ち着いて
Calm down.
そいつの縛りは大した事ない 花の下の白い所を狙えば簡単に倒せる
That things' bind is weak, if you aim the white part below the flower you can defeat it easily.
そっそんなこと言われても・・・・・・っ
E-even if you say that...
１６
やっ
Yah!
あっ
Ah!
おっぱいとぉ・・・おまんこぉ 吸われちゃってるぅぅ・・・・・・っ
My chest... and my pussy... being sucked...!
かっ感じ過ぎちゃうからぁ吸っちゃぁぁ・・・・・・らめぇぇぇ～～～～っ！！ちっ乳首にぃ 雌しべが絡み付
いてぇ・・・ んうぅ・・・っ！
I-it feels too goooood!... don't suck iiiit~~~~!! the buds are coiling my nipples... Uuu...!!
ひゃっ！？
Hya!?
そ・・・そんなに強くぅ引っ張らないでぇ・・・・・・
D..Don't pull it hard......
もっもう ぁ・・・あたし・・・
I-I can't... hold anymore...
おかしくなっちゃうよぉ・・・
It's making me crazy...
あひっ！？
Ahii!?
そ・・・そこは・・・ やめ・・・っ
T-that place is... no, stop...!
あぁっ！くっクリトリスぅシゴかれてりゅぅぅ・・・っ
Aaah! I-it's stroking my clitoris...!
あっ
Ah!
あっ
Ah!
ほ・・・ほんとにっおかしくなっちゃうぅぅ・・・
It's really making me crazy...
１７
き、キリトさんの前で恥ずかしいのにぃ・・・
I-in front of Kirito-san, this shameful so embarassing... <QC: Probably a more..."english" way of putting it, I suppose>
き、気持ちひぃ・・・
F-feels good...<3
こんな・・・っ気持ちひぃぃの初めてぇぇ・・・
it's my first time... to feel this good...
ふぅ んぅーっ
Uu Nguu!
あくぅっ！？
Kuuh!?
おっお尻にぃツタがぁ・・・・・・
Th-the vine is in my anus...
ふぐぅっ！
Guuh!
ツタちんぽ ぉ・・・おいひぃ・・・
Vine's dick... derihyuus...<3
先っぽから甘い汁が溢れてるぅ・・・
Sweet liquid is overflowing from the tip...
もっもう・・・イっちゃう・・・
I-I'll... comee...
なっ何で？ もうちょっとで・・・ っ！？
W-what happened? Just a little more I woul...!?
いっいや・・・そんなピナより太いの挿入れられたら・・・
N-no.. if something thicker than Pina's penetrate me...
んっ んぅー
Mn! Mnnn
１８
は・・・入ってるぅ～っ！
I-it's penetrating me~!
んっ んぅー！！
Mn! Nghh!!
モンスターの太い舌がピナ専用オマンコにぃ 入っちゃってるよぉぉ～～っ！！
A monster's thick tongue is entering Pina's exclusive pussy~~!!
き・・・気持ちぃ・・・いぃぃ・・・
I-it... f-feels... good...<3
んっ
Mn!
んふっ
Ngh!
舌のブツブツがオマンコの中引っ掻かれながらぁ・・・・・・っ
The tongue's bumps are scratching my inside......!
お尻のツタと挟まれてるぅ・・・
It's touching the one inside my ass...<3
か・・・身体中ぅ 掻き回されてぇぇ・・・・・・
M-my whole body... stirred up...
１９
いっイクぅ・・・
C-coming...
イク・・・っ
Come...!
イクっ！
come!
イクっ！
Coming!
んふっ
Ngh!
ピナ以外のモンスターでイっちゃ・・・・・・
A monster other than Pina gonna make me cum......
花の下の白い所を狙えっ！
Hit the white part below the flower now!
２０
短剣スキル ファッドエッジ
Dagger Skill Fad Edge
・・・見ました？
...You watched?
・・・見てない
...No, I didn't.
じゃ、この膨らみは何ですか？
Then, what is this?
そっそれは！？
T-that is!?
あたしの見てこんなになっちゃったんですか？
You got this hard from watching me?
すごいドキドキする・・・
Amazing, it's throbbing...
イク寸前だったから・・・？
Is it about to come...?
・・・オチンチン
...dick
オチンチン欲しいよぉ・・・
I want dick...
しっシリカ！？
S-Silica!?
２１
しょっぱくてちょっと苦い
It's salty and a bit bitter.
これが男性のオチンチンの味・・・
This is a man's penis taste...
でも・・・ 嫌いじゃないかも
but... i don't hate it.
キリトさん・・・ん どうでふか？
Kirito-san...mmn how is it?
もっもう・・・イキそうだよ・・・
I-I... gonna come...
ぷはっ
Fuah!
し・・・シリカ・・・？
Si... Silica...?
イケずにおあずけされる気持ち・・・分かりますか？
You are on the verge...right?
早く助けてくれなかったからこんなになっちゃたんですよ・・・
Because you didn't help me earlier, I became like this...
責任取ってくださいキリトさん・・・
Please take responsibility, Kirito-san...<3
２２
あっ ひうっ
Ah! Hii!
は・・・初めて・・・人の オチン・・・チン・・・
M-my first time... with a man's penis...<3
ピナより・・・気持ちいぃぃ・・・
It feels... better than Pina's...<3
シリカは使い魔とHしてたのか
Silica, you do ecchi things with your familiar?
あっ
Ah!
・・・はい してましたぁ・・・
...Yes, I do...
使い魔をオナニーの道具にするなんて・・・
Using a familiar to satisfy yourself...
とんだ変態ビーストテイマーだな
What a perverted Beast Master you are...
あひぃっ
Hiii!
そ・・・そんな・・・ 変態だなんてぇ・・・
N-no... I'm not a pervert...
２３
そんな変態さんにはおしおきに中出しだっ！
To punish a pervert like you, I will come inside!
シリカの膣内にぃいっぱぃぃ・・・なっ中出しぃ・・・
C-come inside Silica's...<3 a lot...<3
いっぱい・・・おしおきしてくださいぃぃ～～っ！！
P-please... punish me more~~!!
２４
その後色々あったものの・・・
After that, lots of thing happened...
蘇生アイテム[プネウマの花]を手に入れ
I got the revival item (Flower of Pneuma).
ピナを生き返らせる事ができました
I could finally revive Pina.
キリトさんはすぐ最前線に戻ってしまいました
Kirito-san immidiately returned to the front line.
本当は連れて行って欲しかった・・・
Actually I wanted to come along...
でも・・・あたしが行っても手足まといにしかならないから
But... with my skill I will only be a burden
キリトさんと別れて数日たまに寂しい時もあるけれど・・・
It has been some time after I parted with Kirito-san, but when I feel lonely...
そんな時はピナと
with Pina...
キリトさんから貰った短剣があるので大丈夫です
and the dagger that I recieved from Kirito-san, I will be alright <3
ぴっピナのオチンチンとぉ・・・ キリトさんのぉオチンチンがぁぁ・・・
Pina's penis... Kirito-san's penis...
んっ
Mn!
はぁーっ
Haaa!
お腹の中でぇ擦れあってぇぇ・・・気持ちひぃのぉぉぉ～～っ
Rubbing inside my belly... It feels so good~~!<3
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はじめましてorこんにちわ。
Hi, nice to meet you.
印刷所の「触手割」が利用できず、ガッカリな たかねのはなです
I'm Takane no hana, who's disappointed because of from not getting the "Tentacle Rebate" from printing shop.
シリカ本、いかがでしたでしょうか？
Did you like this Silica book?
タイトルに相当悩んだり、当初マンガ２２P予定が２０Pに減り
I was quite troubled choosing the title Choosing the title was troublesome <QC:Flows better>. At first it was planned as 22 pages, but then it got reduced to 20 page.
多少の余裕ができたので触手責めを
But then I got time to spare, so I made these tentacles
増やしつつ２２Pに戻し
I increase it slowly to 22 page again
増ページ分の前後の辻棲合わせに 時間が掛かってしまったため キリトとのカラミを２P減らして・・・・・・
The interlude was taking too much time, so I removed 2 pages of Kirito's intercourse......
とか、やっていたらキリトが挿入から果てるまで たった２Pの超早漏にｗ さすがSAO内一番の反応速度！ｗｗ
Then I realized, Kirito's intercourse was only 2 pages and he came lol. As expected from the fastest reaction speed player in SAO! rofl
さて、次は冬コミになってしまいそうです。
Well, next is Winter Comicket.
本当は夏コミ後に凌辱アスナ本とか出したかったんですがしばらく仕事三昧な感じかな～と。
Actually I had a plan to make an Asuna rape book after Summer Comicket, but I think I'll concentrate for a while on my work.
夏コミ前にコアマガジンからは 初となる単行本が発売されています。
Before the Summer Comicket, I got my first sale on my tankoubon.
同人と合わせ、商業の方も よろしくお願いします
Best regards for other artists and those in the business.
note 1: I know this is pretty loose from the TN script, but can I suggest: "After that, Kirito-san and I spent a night at Floor 35 to rest. As we readied to head to our destination, I thought.../...the bed felt so spacious"
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Currently only proofreading on a whim. I might proofread your stuff...but sorry in advance if I drop it without warning like a hit-and-run Ferrari.
Proofreader...
...because although shit ain't shit unless someone says it's shit, shit stays shit unless someone cleans it up.
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